Sillybean

Revision update

The out-of-order problem is way worse in the second half, which I knew. I still love my subplot, and I think it’s less flawed than I thought it was. The main plot is more so, but… I think I can fix this.

Posted on July 16, 2008 at 8:14 pm in Writing · comment

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